Hello~
It's nice to see a new song from you~! I have a few things I'd like to point out, if you don't mind a bit of attempted constructive criticism.
I think the drums a rather drowned out, don't you think? Maybe it's just my earphones, but I can hardly hear them. Perhaps if you turned down the organs, I could probably hear the other instruments like the... tuba? It sounds like some sort of bass in the background but it's hard to tell since the organ pretty much overpowers it. Unless that is the organ?
I'm no music expert as you can see, but hopefully this has helped a little~ I look forward to the complete version as well as your other songs! Good luck! ^__^